Midterm (version 4) Writeup

so I had a critique with Jill and got some insight on a few more things that needed to be fixed. I took out the lighting fixture in the shots where my character is seen from the book's perspective. I also fixed the ending shots with the text. the area when the character is brought back home is where i reversed the sucked in shot to make it more of a transition back home. I must say that I did not complete all that I should have but I will and this animation will look great when im done. there are just some tweaks... plus i am going to adjust the speed of the opening to slow it down and set more of a foundation for the piece cuz it really moves too fast at the begining.